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This is how John Grochalski starts his poem, “Buddha of Pizza and Beer” in the Current Issue of The Idiom Magazine.
It’s a type of ‘coming of age’ poem and throughout the piece he mentions all those things that we all address at some point in our lives
- when i was first on my own
- losing and gaining friends
- nights i didn’t want to be around anyone
- hung up over some girl
In the short time of the piece he slowly comes to terms with these thoughts, gets his pizza, stops and gets some beer, and goes home “waiting on my moment” becoming some kind of contemporary buddha….
His other piece in this issue, “Our Crowd” has a similar voice as the last piece and his observation of seemingly everyday events again present a narrator who is accepting of a typical day in the life.
We here at the idiom especially liked “this group of old ladies who won’t quit laughing at their folly”, “the confused austrian yelling into his phone”, and “the chinese tourists taking photos of their mistake”. All these characters make for a surreal scene in the poem and help to create the visual of place and surroundings for the piece.
So this weekend two events going on….
Saturday night we are having Bud Smith’s second book release party because the first one was so good! You can see pictures of the first one in one of our previous posts…
This book release party is at 8:16 Studios and again we’ll have bands and beer and poets and smokes and Bud Smith’s novel Tollbooth for a nice lil discounted price…heres facebook info on it
On Sunday, the South Brunswick Library starts up its Sunday afternoon poetry readings and Hank Kalet a poet from the previous issue of the Idiom is one of the features….starts at 2 and there’s an open mic afterwards so bring some words….here’s a link to the full schedule for the year
We’re hanging out at the Revolutionary Lounge at the Tuesday night open mic. Every week we meet here and read our poems….test them out to an audience who’s listening….kids looking to hear something new….Nicole Greenwood comes up to me and says,
“I have a poem”
“Ok” I say.
“It’s made out of Haiku,” she says.
I’d recently read Patricia Smith’s sonnet poem “Motown Crown” That’s fifteen sonnets the last line always the start of the next sonnet and then the fifteenth sonnet uses all the previous first lines from every sonnet to make its own….so a poem made of haiku I liked the idea for….
Each Haiku’d stanza makes the poem sound kind like a list. Read them aloud like you would any haiku and you naturally pause a little between lines and stanzas. But the listed haiku don’t stand alone they create a slightly abstracted narrative and the setting of a carnival and dizziness one receives when hanging out in such a place contributes to that abstractness. Young love is mentioned, the confusion adolescents feel and the church that wants apologies gets pushed aside towards the end of the poem when none of that stuff seems to matter during the birth of the child. There is no indication if the parents are the same as the young love in the middle of the poem but Nicole doesn’t need to tell us that and moves us throughout the piece and through time and has us work a little to see the transitions. I like working with poems and making sense of them on my own.
Check out Nicole’s poem on the Idiom Website and other pieces from this issue and let us know what you think….
Here’s a bunch of pictures from Bud Smith’s book release party for his novel Tollbooth….Thanks to everyone who came out and all the performers and everything.
Don’t worry if ya missed it! There is a second release at 8:16 Studio in Toms River next Saturday... there will be more bands and a reading by both the writer of the book and all the writers who helped edit it…
Perhaps you can’t make any events we have….you can also get Tollbooth here…
Tonight is the book release party for Bud Smith’s novel, Tollbooth published by Piscataway House Publications.
Go to Revolutionary Lounge in Toms River from 7-9 to hear Bud Smith read excerpts from his book and performances by Mark Brunetti, Love Hustle, Chris Rockwell, and Nathan Dickinson….
The book will sell at a release party discount of $8! Come on out, meet the author and publishers and be a part of that ever growing jersey literary scene…
The next few chapters in Tollbooth! Check out our book release parties coming up….